The Commitment
Connie Ramos, a thirty-seven-year-old Chicana woman in a run-down New York City apartment, faces many problems. She has a history of mental health issues and recently lost custody of her daughter, Angelina. After her niece, Dolly, is badly beaten by her pimp, Connie gets involved, injuring the pimp. She is then arrested and committed to Rockover State Hospital. Her brother, Luis, and sister-in-law, Elena, are part of her commitment. Connie feels trapped and unfairly institutionalized, believing the system is against poor women of color like her. Her first days at Rockover are filled with confusion, forced medication, and a deep sense of helplessness.
First Contact with Luciente
While at Rockover, Connie begins to have strong hallucinations and hear voices. One specific vision is of Luciente, a woman who says she is from the year 2137. Luciente appears to Connie through a shimmering portal, at first confused and speaking a slightly different English. Luciente explains she is a 'sender' from a future where gender roles are flexible, technology serves the community, and the environment is respected. Connie is at first doubtful, thinking these experiences are from her medication or her worsening mental state. But Luciente's descriptions of her world are too detailed and consistent to ignore, making Connie wonder.
Glimpses of Mattapoisett
Luciente starts to 'pull' Connie into her future world, Mattapoisett, a communal village in rural Massachusetts. Connie sees a society where children are raised together in 'maternity' houses, gender is not just male or female (everyone uses 'per' and 'person'), and work is shared and meaningful. She meets Luciente's partner, Bee, and learns about their advanced ecological practices, sustainable living, and lack of a money-based economy. Connie learns about 'flesh-and-blood' (biological children) and 'kiddie' (a child raised communally), and sees their non-hierarchical way of making decisions. The strong difference between Mattapoisett's harmony and her own oppressive life increases Connie's inner struggle and her wish for a better world.
The Dystopian Alternative
Along with her visits to Mattapoisett, Connie is tormented by frightening visions of another future, a harsh dystopia where women are surgically altered, exploited for their bodies, and limited to specific roles. She sees women as 'brood mares' or 'dolls,' without control over their lives, serving the pleasure and reproduction of a male-dominated elite. These visions are broken and nightmarish, showing extreme class divisions, environmental damage, and no compassion. These horrible glimpses are linked to the choices made in Connie's present, suggesting that humanity is at a critical point between these two possible destinies. This duality deepens Connie's emotional distress and sense of urgency.
Connie's Past Unveiled
The story often goes into Connie's past through vivid flashbacks, showing the many unfortunate events and systemic injustices that led to her current situation. We learn about her difficult childhood, her relationship with her daughter Angelina, and why Angelina was taken by social services due to Connie's perceived instability and poverty. These flashbacks show the constant sexism and racism she has faced, her mental health struggles, and how the system has repeatedly failed her. Her past is a cycle of loss, abuse, and being misunderstood, making her current imprisonment at Rockover especially painful and reinforcing her feeling of powerlessness.
The Doctor's Interventions
At Rockover, Connie undergoes various treatments, including strong tranquilizers, isolation, and, most troubling, the attention of Dr. Redding. Dr. Redding, who seems kind but is ultimately controlling, is doing experimental research on brain stimulation and behavior modification. He sees Connie as a good subject for his 'therapy,' which involves implanting electrodes in her brain to control her perceived 'aggression' and 'delusions' (her communications with Luciente). Connie resists these interventions, seeing them as an attempt to take away her individuality and suppress her experiences, even as she questions if her future visions are real. The hospital environment reflects the oppressive forces in her life.
Luciente's Warnings and the Turning Point
As Connie's connection with Luciente grows, Luciente reveals the urgent truth: the future is not set. There are two paths, and Connie's time is the turning point. Luciente explains she is 'sending' to Connie because Connie has a unique sensitivity and potential to affect the outcome. The doctors at Rockover, especially Dr. Redding, are unknowingly pushing humanity towards the bad future through their harsh practices and technological control. Luciente urges Connie to resist, to hold onto her sanity and her connection to Mattapoisett, stressing that her choices, even within the asylum, have big implications for future generations. This news places a huge burden on Connie.
The Escape Attempt
Driven by Luciente's warnings and her own desperate wish for freedom, Connie plans an escape from Rockover. She tries to get help from other patients, including Sybil and Ginny, who are also victims of the system. Her escape attempt comes from a desperate need to avoid the imminent brain surgery Dr. Redding is planning, which she fears will permanently cut off her connection to Luciente and the hopeful future. The attempt shows her resilience and her refusal to be completely controlled, though it ultimately fails. She is recaptured and faces more punishment, reinforcing her powerlessness within the institution but also strengthening her resolve.
The Final Procedure and Despair
Despite her resistance, Connie is eventually forced to have brain surgery, a procedure involving electrode implantation. The experience is traumatic and confusing. After the surgery, her connection to Luciente and Mattapoisett seems to vanish. She feels numb, empty, and without the vivid experiences that had given her hope. This period marks a deep sense of loss and despair for Connie, as she considers the possibility that her visions were indeed delusions, or that the surgery has successfully 'cured' her of her ability to see the future. The dystopian visions also fade, leaving her in a grim, present reality without hope for either future.
A Glimmer of Hope and the Ultimate Act
After a period of deep despair, a faint echo of Luciente's presence returns to Connie. She realizes that the surgery did not completely break her connection, but only weakened it. Luciente's last, desperate messages emphasize the urgency of the situation and the threat from Dr. Redding and his colleagues, who represent the forces pushing towards the bad future. Connie understands that the struggle is not just internal but must happen in the physical world. In a moment of clarity and desperate determination, seeing the doctors as the literal agents of the horrible future, Connie takes extreme action. She poisons Dr. Redding and three other doctors, sacrificing her own freedom and perhaps her life, in a final, violent act of resistance to save the future she believes in.
The Aftermath and Ambiguity
After the poisoning, Connie is immediately caught. The story ends with her facing the severe results of her actions, likely further imprisonment or more intense institutionalization. The ending leaves the reader wondering about humanity's ultimate fate and which future will win. Connie's act is a desperate, violent gamble, an attempt to stop the bad future at its source. While she loses her personal freedom, the book suggests her sacrifice might have made a difference, offering a small chance for Mattapoisett to thrive. The uncertainty makes the reader think about the power of individual action and the hard choices needed to fight for a better world.