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Unfaithful

Elisa S. Amore (2017)

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Fantasy / Young Adult / Romance

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An angel of death falls for the girl he was sent to kill, igniting a desperate battle against fate, jealous servants of Death, and the devastating consequences of cheating destiny.

Synopsis

Evan, a Subterranean Angel tasked with enforcing humanity's destiny by taking lives, falls in love with Gemma, the girl he was sent to kill. Five months into their forbidden romance, Evan reveals a dangerous secret, causing Death to return with its servants to claim Gemma. As they face relentless pursuit, Evan will go to any lengths to protect her, but jealousy, betrayal, and emotional devastation test their bond. They struggle to escape the destiny orchestrated by the Màsala, the ancient beings who designed the Subterraneans' purpose, forcing them to confront the impossible challenge of defying Fate itself.
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Not specified min
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Medium
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Mood
Suspenseful, Romantic, Intense, Dark
✓ Read this if...
You enjoy forbidden romance between a supernatural being and a human, with high stakes and a battle against destiny.
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You dislike intense emotional drama, constant peril, or stories where characters struggle endlessly against an unyielding fate.

Plot Summary

The Weight of a Forbidden Love

Five months have passed since Evan, a Subterranean tasked with enforcing human destiny, defied his mission to kill Gemma. Instead, he fell in love with her, protecting her from the fate prescribed by the Màsala. Their time together has been idyllic, a period of intense happiness for Gemma, who nonetheless feels an unease that their reprieve is temporary. Evan, perhaps too confident in their safety, begins to let his guard down. This peaceful time is a calm before the storm, establishing their deep bond while hinting at the inevitable return of the forces they have defied.

A Secret Revealed

In a moment of vulnerability, Evan makes a critical error: he reveals a secret to Gemma. The nature of this secret is not explicitly detailed but is a breach of the rules governing his existence as a Subterranean and his defiance of the Màsala. This revelation, though perhaps intended as a sign of trust, has dire consequences, described as an 'error that can be paid for only with blood.' This act directly triggers the return of the antagonistic forces, ending their brief period of normalcy and starting the conflict.

Death's Retribution

The revelation of Evan's secret acts as a beacon, alerting 'Death'—likely a personification or a governing entity within the Màsala's hierarchy—to their continued defiance. Death immediately dispatches its 'faithful servants' to hunt down and kill Gemma, fulfilling her original destiny. This reintroduces the main external conflict, raising the stakes significantly. The antagonists are no longer an abstract concept but active, relentless pursuers, forcing Evan and Gemma to confront the direct consequences of their actions and the power they have challenged.

Desperate Measures for Survival

Faced with the imminent threat to Gemma's life, Evan's protective instincts take over. He is 'desperate' and willing to 'do anything to save her.' This highlights his unwavering love and commitment, reinforcing his character arc from a destined killer to a devoted guardian. The story emphasizes the intensity of their struggle, as they are forced to flee or fight against the servants of Death. This section underscores the core conflict: the battle between Evan's forbidden love and the force of fate.

No Safe Haven

Evan and Gemma attempt to find refuge, believing certain places might offer them safety from Death's relentless pursuit. However, the story makes it clear that 'the menace will seek them out even where they feel safest.' This establishes the pervasive and inescapable nature of their predicament. It suggests that Death's power is vast, potentially all-knowing, and that there is no true escape from the destiny they have tried to cheat. This element raises the tension, creating a sense of claustrophobia and despair as their options dwindle.

The Clash of Passion and Fate

The story explicitly frames the core struggle as 'the challenge between passion and death.' Evan and Gemma's passionate love for each other is directly pitted against the formidable, destructive power of 'Death' and the predetermined 'fate' enforced by the Màsala. This conflict is not merely external but deeply emotional, as their very bond is what has set them against these cosmic forces. Their defiance shows the strength of their connection, making their fight for survival also a fight for the validity of their love against overwhelming odds.

Internal and External Devastation

Beyond the external threat of Death's servants, Evan and Gemma also face internal challenges. The description mentions 'jealousy, betrayal, and emotional devastation' as forces that will 'pit the protagonists against each other.' This introduces complexity, suggesting that their relationship is not impervious to the stress and manipulation inherent in their situation. These internal conflicts could stem from the secret Evan revealed, the pressures of their flight, or the machinations of their enemies, threatening to unravel their bond from the inside even as they fight for their lives.

The Difficulty of Escaping Fate

The overarching theme is that 'Evan and Gemma find it isn’t easy to escape their fate.' This statement summarizes their struggle, emphasizing the power of destiny and the Màsala. Their love has allowed them to momentarily cheat death, but the consequences are severe and persistent. The story explores how much free will can defy a predetermined path, suggesting that while their love is strong, the forces aligned against them are ancient and deeply entrenched, making their escape a monumental and perhaps ultimately impossible task.

The Màsala's Design

The Màsala are the ancient entities responsible for 'enforc[ing] the destiny of humankind on Earth.' They do this through 'Subterraneans,' a class of 'Angels condemned to carry the weight of death on their shoulders in order to please Fate.' This establishes the cosmic hierarchy and the system Evan belongs to. Their role as architects of destiny sets the stage for the fundamental conflict: Evan and Gemma's attempt to disrupt this established order, highlighting the immense power and authority the Màsala wield over mortal lives and the very concept of fate.

Evan's Defiance and Love

Evan, as a Subterranean, was originally 'sent to kill' Gemma, fulfilling his role in enforcing destiny. However, he 'has denied his own nature' because he 'has fallen hopelessly in love' with her. This act of defiance is the catalyst for the entire series of events in 'Unfaithful.' His choice to protect Gemma over fulfilling his duty shows the transformative power of love and sets him on a collision course with the very forces that created him, defining his character and the central conflict of the story.

Principal Figures

Gemma

The Protagonist

From a destined victim, she becomes the catalyst for a cosmic rebellion, fighting for her life and love against predetermined fate.

Evan

The Protagonist

Transforms from an enforcer of fate to a defiant protector, sacrificing his original purpose for love, and facing the severe consequences.

Death

The Antagonist

Remains a constant, unyielding force, representing the immutable nature of fate that Evan and Gemma strive to defy.

Màsala

The Antagonist (indirect)

Their role remains constant as the ultimate authority and architects of fate, their will driving the conflict.

Subterraneans

The Supporting/Antagonist

Their collective arc reinforces the power of the Màsala and the difficulty of escaping the established order.

Faithful Servants (of Death)

The Antagonist

Their role is to relentlessly pursue Gemma, acting as the physical manifestation of Death's will.

Themes & Insights

The Power of Love vs. Fate

This is the central theme, exploring whether love can truly defy a predetermined destiny. Evan's entire character arc is built around his choice to abandon his duty as a Subterranean and protect Gemma, driven purely by his love for her. Their 'intense period of happiness' together is a direct result of this defiance, but it comes with severe consequences. The story explicitly states the 'challenge between passion and death,' pitting their powerful emotional bond against the ancient, unyielding forces of the Màsala and Death. This theme questions the limits of free will in a predestined world, using their relationship as the ultimate test.

The challenge between passion and death will pit the protagonists against each other.

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Consequences of Defiance

The story heavily emphasizes the repercussions of challenging established order. Evan's act of saving Gemma is a direct defiance of his nature and the Màsala's rules, leading to 'Death return[ing] to claim Gemma.' The secret he reveals, a consequence of his love and perhaps his altered state, further worsens their plight, described as an 'error that can be paid for only with blood.' This theme highlights that while love can inspire monumental acts, those acts often come with a heavy price, forcing the characters to face the full weight of their rebellion.

But what are the consequences of cheating Death?

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The Illusion of Safety

A recurring idea is that true safety is unattainable for Evan and Gemma. Despite their initial period of happiness and any attempts to find refuge, 'the menace will seek them out even where they feel safest.' This creates a sense of dread and helplessness, reinforcing the formidable power of their adversaries. It suggests that their defiance has made them perpetual targets, unable to truly escape the reach of Death and the Màsala, thereby increasing the stakes and the emotional toll on the protagonists.

The menace will seek them out even where they feel safest.

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Betrayal and Jealousy

Beyond external threats, the story hints at internal turmoil within the protagonists' relationship. The mention of 'jealousy, betrayal, and emotional devastation' suggests that their bond is not immune to the immense pressure they are under. These internal conflicts could arise from past secrets, the stress of their flight, or even the manipulative tactics of their enemies. This theme adds a layer of psychological complexity, exploring how extreme circumstances can erode trust and potentially turn loved ones against each other, making their fight for survival even more challenging.

In the face of jealousy, betrayal, and emotional devastation, Evan and Gemma find it isn’t easy to escape their fate.

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Plot Devices & Literary Techniques

The Secret

An 'unmentionable secret' revealed by Evan, triggering the climax.

Evan's revelation of an 'unmentionable secret' serves as the primary inciting incident for the renewed conflict. Its specific nature is left ambiguous, but it is explicitly stated to be an 'error that can be paid for only with blood.' This device functions as a catastrophic plot trigger, directly alerting Death and its servants to Evan and Gemma's continued defiance. It creates immediate danger and propels the plot forward from a period of relative calm into intense action and pursuit, raising the stakes significantly for both protagonists.

The Pursuit

The relentless hunting of Gemma by Death's servants.

The 'faithful servants' dispatched by Death to kill Gemma establish a continuous, high-stakes pursuit narrative. This device generates constant tension and urgency, as Evan and Gemma are always on the run, unable to find lasting safety. The pursuit reinforces the theme of the inescapable nature of fate and the formidable power of their antagonists, driving much of the external action and forcing the protagonists into desperate measures and strategic retreats, ensuring there is never a dull moment in their struggle for survival.

The Màsala's Decree

The overarching system of destiny enforced by ancient entities.

The Màsala's role in enforcing human destiny through Subterraneans creates the fundamental conflict of the story. This plot device establishes the cosmic rules and the predetermined fate that Evan and Gemma are rebelling against. It provides the 'why' behind Evan's original mission and the 'why' behind Death's relentless pursuit. It sets the scale of the conflict, elevating it beyond a mere personal struggle to one against ancient, powerful forces, making their defiance all the more heroic and perilous.

Critical analysis

Notable Quotes

Love is a dangerous game, especially when played with hearts that refuse to break.

A reflection on the nature of love and heartbreak in the magical world.

Some secrets are meant to stay buried, no matter how much the truth claws at your soul.

The protagonist grapples with a hidden truth that could change everything.

The most beautiful lies are often whispered by those you trust the most.

A moment of betrayal and realization about deceptive appearances.

Magic isn't just about power; it's about the choices you make with it.

A mentor advises the protagonist on the responsibility that comes with their abilities.

Even in the darkest of shadows, a flicker of hope can ignite a revolution.

Amidst oppression, a small act of defiance sparks a larger movement.

Hearts are not meant to be broken, but forged anew in the fires of adversity.

After a significant emotional setback, the character finds strength to rebuild.

Destiny is a path, not a prison. You always have the power to diverge.

Challenging the idea of predetermined fate and embracing free will.

To forgive is not to forget, but to release the chains that bind you to the past.

A character struggles with forgiveness for a past wrong.

Sometimes, the greatest battles are fought within the confines of your own mind.

The protagonist faces internal conflict and self-doubt.

The whispers of a forgotten past can echo louder than any present scream.

Ancient history and its impact on current events come to light.

True strength isn't about how many times you fall, but how many times you rise.

A moment of encouragement after a defeat.

There's a fine line between love and obsession, and it's easily blurred in the heart of a war.

Exploring the complex emotions of a character torn between affection and possessiveness during conflict.

The world may be unfaithful, but your own spirit must always remain true.

A final reflection on maintaining integrity in a world full of deceit.

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The core conflict revolves around Evan, a Subterranean Angel sent to kill Gemma, defying his nature and falling in love with her, thus 'cheating Death.' This defiance leads to Death actively pursuing Gemma, sending servants to claim her life and forcing Evan and Gemma to fight against their predetermined fate.

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